Tuesday 30 April 2013

writing complaint

Dear Ms. Dawson,
We are writing to express  our concern regarding pizza day menu. We all really enjoyed fundraising activity for the school and love Pizza Day. However  we would like to change a better example because doughnuts and sugary drinks are not good for children's health. they make a lot of health problems like obesity and heart diseases. According to statistic of obesity, it's getting worse every year. We would appreciate if you change healthier menu. Thank you for your consideration. We're looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Billy

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